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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2003-08-07 08:36 pm

granola, billy/dom drabble for starfishchick

granola - billy/dom

It's about balance these days, accepting life in joy and sorrow, stillness and turmoil. The world spins around Billy in a dizzying rush, driving him to seek peace.

He's taken to savoring the early tranquility. He watches Dominic glowing pink and golden in the sun, working through his morning regime on the smooth planks of the deck. Dominic knows the value of routine. He rolls up the mat, props it by the sliding door, and snags a bowl of cereal before bestowing a kiss on Billy, quiet by the window.

Billy tastes almonds and honey, the bitter and the sweet.
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2003-08-07 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, babes, this is lovely - so gorgeous!! I'm lousy at feedback but this is a beautiful piece of work. I love it.

*treasures*
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2003-08-08 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Am determined to give better feedback.

This piece is ... glowing. Like the sunrise you describe, this fic is luminous and warm and shining. It's contentment, and it's beautiful.

*feels silly*

And then they fucked on the washing machine.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
*giggle* *snogs you*

thank you, sweetie :)

[identity profile] hjartad.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Lovely and quiet. Beautiful. :)

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 08:58 am (UTC)(link)
thank you! i suspect that the recent au-ness of lotrips100 has made me long for the everyday :)

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 03:31 am (UTC)(link)
This just made me feel content. And yet slightly uneasy. But I think that last part is all me... wishing I'd found Billy's balance in my own life.
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2003-08-08 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
After sleeping on it, and reflecting, I have to agree with you, dorrie6, that I think that last part is all me... wishing I'd found Billy's balance in my own life.

Also, Dom doing yoga on my back porch...

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 09:05 am (UTC)(link)
dom doing yoga on my back porch is all i really want out of life ;)

honestly, i'm thrilled to bits that you thought about it beyond "that was sweet . .comment . .next entry"

:)
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2003-08-08 10:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, babes, I always think about them after ... it's never just a case of 'read, comment, click', especially with your work. It has too much meaning to do that!

But I feel silly leaving feedback like my second attempt - I always think it sounds silly. 'Your fic is like a sunrise'? WTF??

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 11:37 am (UTC)(link)
pshaw.

that is all :D

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 09:02 am (UTC)(link)
huh. that's an interesting reaction.

it just made me lonely. as noted above :)

sigh.....

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I wish I were a publisher Jaci.
I'd gobble you up!
*hug*
~J~

ahhhhhh.....

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2003-08-08 11:24 pm (UTC)(link)
*blush*
*swoon*

[identity profile] scattergold.livejournal.com 2003-08-09 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, so lovely. :)

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-08-09 09:02 pm (UTC)(link)
*beam* thank you!