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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2004-09-02 02:23 am

drabble: sheen. dom/miranda

[sheen] - dom/miranda
for [livejournal.com profile] starfishchick

There's a light sheen of sweat on Miranda's skin, and it suddenly makes sense to Dom, all the references to ladies glowing in the plays from America's Deep South.

He'd like to lick her there, that spot at the base of her throat and see if she tastes of salt or stardust. He'd get away with it. Dom's never been known as a bloke who could keep his tongue in his mouth. She'd slap him for show and follow it with a laugh, and her laugh is a glorious thing, but taste of her will be sweeter for the waiting.

[identity profile] scaryemilie.livejournal.com 2004-09-02 02:55 am (UTC)(link)
ffffffffffffffffffuck!

<3

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-09-03 12:38 am (UTC)(link)
indeed! thank you :)
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2004-09-02 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
Rawr, licking and tongue and neck and Miranda's laugh and yes.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-09-03 12:42 am (UTC)(link)
mrawr! thank you :) sorry i can't write karl - he is an enigma to me :)
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2004-09-03 06:34 am (UTC)(link)
I wouldn't trade this Dom/Miranda for Karl anyway.

I don't often see Karl written in a way that I believe - Min is an exception to that, of course.

[identity profile] birds-sing.livejournal.com 2004-09-02 07:42 am (UTC)(link)
I love it!!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-09-03 12:44 am (UTC)(link)
thank you!

[identity profile] thejennabides.livejournal.com 2004-09-02 12:29 pm (UTC)(link)
He'd like to lick her there, that spot at the base of her throat and see if she tastes of salt or stardust.

Oh how I love that line! "Of salt or stardust" should be the name of something.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-09-03 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
sometimes, when phrases like that appear, i wish that i was collecting them in something more permanent than pixels.

thank you :)

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/faite_/ 2004-09-03 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
see if she tastes of salt or stardust

It's so beautiful. I love the self-indulgence of Dom and the way everything is so...tangible.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-09-03 02:23 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you so much!

[identity profile] tipgardner.livejournal.com 2004-09-10 01:30 pm (UTC)(link)
I've only been reading your work a short while, but I can already see how deftly you weave abstraction and pin point clarity together. This is a lovely drabble. I emjoyed the play of moody artiness and Dom's star powerdom.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-09-11 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
thank you so much!