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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2004-05-28 07:02 pm
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ficlet: vestigial mode of time measurement

Vestigial Mode of Time Measurement - simon, river. or simon/river. it's up to you.
so there's this day after tomorrow challenge? but i don't have the bookmark and i never signed up anyway. that didn't stop me from writing this, though. more's the pity. so totally not what i'm supposed to be writing.


"It's all used up," River said at dinner. "Finished and grey. They'll throw it away now." She tilted her head to the side, hair falling in tangles. "I wonder if they'll scream when they fall."

After, reading the waves coming across the Cortex - floods . . . earthquakes . . . Osiris . . .dead . . . Osiris . . .Osiris - Wash's hands grew cold and he called for Simon.

"Isn't that?" he trailed off as he pointed at the screen.

"It was. Long ago." Simon spun away from Wash's sympathetic eyes.

River, curled at the foot of his bed, looked up at him. "The day is over and they're covered up," she said. "They're grey." She pulled her knees tight against her chest.

Simon nodded and sat beside her. "I know, mei-mei."

She reached out, toyed with the button on his shirt. "I didn't know it was such a long goodbye. I should have known." He made soothing noises, sweet little sounds as she rested her head in his lap. He combed through her hair with his fingers, and wondered what the end of days looked like from the outside, storms and screams swirling.

There were so many worlds, and the end of the day meant nothing out in the black.






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[identity profile] voleuse.livejournal.com 2004-05-28 08:36 pm (UTC)(link)
the master list (http://www.livejournal.com/users/anniesj/263252.html)

Do eeeet.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-05-28 08:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*does* thank you!

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2004-05-29 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Omg. Your icon. *dies* So preeeetty!

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2004-05-29 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
This is beautiful, my dear. Really gorgeous. Thank you for posting.

Welp, I'm off to watch Firefly, disk 3. w00t! I needsss a Firefly icon. *googles*

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 10:37 am (UTC)(link)
!

YOU ARE ON DISK THREE???

*weeps*

[identity profile] willysunny.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 10:46 am (UTC)(link)
meep. *scuffs foot* *points finger at hubby* he threatened to return the disks. omg. i'm so ashamed. *covers face with hands*

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
omg firefly yay!

thank you :)

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 10:36 am (UTC)(link)
GAH. Why did it take me so long to read this??

Your River is so perfect I can't even express it. And Simon, of course, Simon too, but River

"It's all used up," River said at dinner. "Finished and grey. They'll throw it away now." She tilted her head to the side, hair falling in tangles. "I wonder if they'll scream when they fall."

GAH.

This is so so perfect.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 02:47 pm (UTC)(link)
yayayayay!

*ahem* sorry. i just think river is really hard to get right, and so i wasn't sure. and so, yay! thank you :)
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2005-09-14 05:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Having now seen Firefly, I can read your fic! DUDE!

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2005-10-02 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG FICLET!
"Finished and grey. They'll throw it away now." She tilted her head to the side, hair falling in tangles. "I wonder if they'll scream when they fall."

So perfectly captured.
You are amazing, sweetie.