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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2004-06-03 11:34 am

chapter twenty: the dementor's kiss

[The Dementor's Kiss] - Draco/Neville
yeah, I don't know where it came from either

"I'm not convinced he had a soul for them to remove," Draco said, almost to himself. "Do you suppose they protested? Do dementors have standards for criminals?"

"A little more earth in that one," Neville said, eyeing the repotting. Then, "Sometimes I think Harry has it easy. He knows his parents are dead. But what about us? Sorry your mum lost her mind? Your father his soul? There's no sympathy card for that."

Draco is all sharp angles, but relaxing into the circle of Neville's arms he is surprised at the strength beneath the softness. Neville holds off the chill.

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2004-06-03 11:48 am (UTC)(link)
Draco is all sharp angles, but relaxing into the circle of Neville's arms he is surprised at the strength beneath the softness. Neville holds off the chill.

Dude.

*loves*

What a perfect thing for this pairing... something they could so easily have in common when all is said and done. Wow.

*loves more*

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm still kind of wigged by this, but i have a thing about neville's parents and him not being able to mourn them. and so, this. and i liked the idea of draco only being able to really talk when he's .. uh .. getting his hands dirty ;)

[identity profile] iolanthe-rosa.livejournal.com 2004-06-03 12:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that was great! So sweet and sad and...unexpected.

Funny, I was just telling [livejournal.com profile] dorrie6 that I wanted her to write a Neville gardening drabble, and here is, potting plants. Thank you!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm sure that neville and gardening stuff is the world's biggest hp fandom cliche . . .and i totally don't care. it's a bit of his samwise gamgee side and i love it to bits ;)

thank you!

[identity profile] helpwess.livejournal.com 2004-06-03 12:19 pm (UTC)(link)
when have i ever liked draco/neville before?
um, never.
when did i start liking draco/neville?
um, right now.
damn! so tiny and good!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! i'm still surprised that i wrote it! thank you :)

[identity profile] shinyredtype.livejournal.com 2004-06-03 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Love this one, [livejournal.com profile] jacito.

Unrelated, this blasted meeting is going until 6pm and no one bothered to tell me. Thus, I will have to catch the 6:20 ferry, which will put me in Seattle at 7pm and then Capitol Hill at....sometime? So I think I will check the restaurant first and then your place, and I'll probably grab food along the way.

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-06-03 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU WROTE DRACO!
with Neville...hmmm.
I loved it!

Sorry your mum lost her mind? Your father his soul? There's no sympathy card for that."
Neville. wow.

Beautiful, sweetie.



[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
dude, i can't believe i wrote it. but lucius was the first person i thought of for the title, and so . .this.

thank you :)

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*clap clap*

[identity profile] jenish.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! That was so sweet. Somehow it works, too, although I've never really considered this pairing before. Awww!

But what about us? Sorry your mum lost her mind? Your father his soul? There's no sympathy card for that

He's so right. Beautifully put, so Neville-like, and conveys so much about the spaces in language, what we don't have words for.

Awesome. *heart*

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
it's just so weird. it's like i pulled the pairing out of a hat or something. i'm glad it works :)

[identity profile] iolanthe-rosa.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 05:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not enough into the fandom to know what's cliché�. It all feels fresh to me!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-04 07:16 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm not either - i write, i don't really read. so i can blissfully write and it's all new as far as i'm concerned :)