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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2004-12-17 11:17 pm

drabble: contemplative - remus/sirius

[contemplative] - remus/sirius
part of dorrito's every flavour mood beans.

"It's happening again," Sirius said. "I felt it coming." The darkness has returned and they are beginning to reform the Order.

Sirius shudders and shifts into Padfoot, circles the tattered rug and settles at Remus's feet. Remus watches the light against the wall change from gold to pink to nothing at all. He would like very much to go far away. Somewhere sunny. He's not been properly warm in ages. He'd wear thin cotton to hide his scars from dark haired boys.

Sirius becomes himself, leans against the chair, not Remus. Remus is bound to them all. He will stay.

[identity profile] jenish.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh.

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 05:19 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, heavy.
You akeep killing me with 'last lines'. Oh why do you mock me? heh.

So much is said in this part, I had to watch the image over and over:
Sirius shudders and shifts into Padfoot, circles the tattered rug and settles at Remus's feet.

[identity profile] soberloki.livejournal.com 2004-12-18 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa.

OK, you have to stop doing this to me. My brain threatens to be broken, and you're the one with the many pieces of straw!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
:)

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
i try to write good last lines to make up for the rest of the story ;)

that was my favorite image, too! <3

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 04:12 am (UTC)(link)
*pets your brain* :)

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 05:58 am (UTC)(link)
i try to write good last lines to make up for the rest of the story ;)

oh, you! heh.
*glomp*

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
i think i am going to save myself the bother and -just- write the last line for yuletide :P

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2004-12-20 07:03 am (UTC)(link)
heh.
"It's a think-piece of a fic, contained all in one brilliant last line."

*hug*

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2004-12-21 05:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, what a very perfect and very lovely drabble for this mood!

*happy sigh*

Sirius becomes himself, leans against the chair, not Remus. Remus is bound to them all. He will stay.

Yeah.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-12-29 09:31 pm (UTC)(link)
i like this one much better now then when i wrote it. i think it's because i have some distance on what i had to cut out of it. thank you!

[identity profile] rambling-roses.livejournal.com 2005-01-09 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my. That's beautiful.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-10 03:41 am (UTC)(link)
thank you!