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[marginalia]

oh, and i wrote this last night - this is how the world ends - bb/dm/ew. miscommunication challenge. i tried, per usual, to do a bit of the show don't tell, unlike some of the other submissions this time.

/catty

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[starfishchick]

I'm so lousy at feedback - I don't know enough about writing to say what I like or don't like.

Clearly, I'm also not good enough at English to write a sentence that expresses how I feel. What I MEANT to say was that I don't know enough about writing to write intelligent feedback like it's 'tight' or 'well-crafted' or anything else literary like that.

I just know if I like it, if it touches me on an emotional level, etc.

THAT'S what I meant. I think.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

but that's good to hear anyway, you know? if something touches someone emotionally then i know that the words were well chosen and it was well structured to provoke that reaction.