and if he seems a little strange, well, baby, anyone can change

[marginalia]

i wrote this - there be monsters, billy/dom for the sf/fantasy au challenge. feel weird getting comments on it, though, because i think anything good about it is lifted from michael marshall smith. so if you liked it, go read only forward. it's obviously a different style (like, hi. it's my phrasing and rhythm), but the world is all his. so, yeah. weird.

and then this - transient - elijah/josh. (since i'm contractually obligated to tell dorrie6 whenever i write anything.) same challenge. in the shimmer and glow-verse, so i'm ripping off myself for a change. it feels choppy, though. erm.

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[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

(since i'm contractually obligated to tell dorrie6 whenever i write anything.)

You better believe you are. :)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

and i really can't afford to break contract right now.

i'm clearly not genetically programmed, though, or i would have pimped the first one earlier ;)

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

ps: I didn't think it was choppy at all.

[starfishchick]

Neither did I.

*looks about for interesting things to say, so as to distract entertain jaci at work*

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

i don't think it's as choppy this morning as it was last night.

i should really sleep on my writing before i comment on it ;)