double drabble: diamonds on the beds of his thumbnails

[marginalia]

[diamonds on the beds of his thumbnails] - harry/elijah for ezzvaldez
this is officially the Latest Fic Ever. double drabble. slightly smutty for a change.

The whole dance floor is twisting and writhing and Elijah thinks that if he rose straight up in the air and peered down through the smoke and the flashing lights, they would be one giant beautiful body, all sleek limbs and sweat and sparkle.

This is a gift Harry could give to him, if only Elijah knew how to ask.

He doesn’t know that, but he does know to ask for other things, questions in the palm of his hand and answers in the way Harry dips his head and then toes out his cigarette.

They work their way off of the floor, slinkster cool. In the washroom, Harry mutters something that sounds like Latin and just might be. Elijah doesn't know, doesn't care, and by the sound of it Harry doesn’t care about much of anything either.

Everything’s undone, Harry has scars everywhere, and when Elijah brushes over them with his fingertips they glow softly, a dusting over marks on his hands, his shoulders, his back. So many marks, so permanent for so young, and then Harry drops to his knees, whisperhissing words, taking Elijah out and in, strong and sure, and when he comes he thinks it’s magic.

Comments

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

Wheeeeeeeee I love this pairing!

Everything’s undone, Harry has scars everywhere, and when Elijah brushes over them with his fingertips they glow softly, a dusting over marks on his hands, his shoulders, his back. So many marks, so permanent for so young, and then Harry drops to his knees, whisperhissing words, taking Elijah out and in, strong and sure, and when he comes he thinks it’s magic.

Dude. That's like one of the best paragraphs EVER.

omg.

[farothear.livejournal.com]

oh, this is *nice*. i love the image in the first paragraph in particular. it's nothing new per se, but the understand that harry could make elijah see exactly that is chilling in a way.

[tipgardner.livejournal.com]

RPS meets HP slash...brilliant! Brilliant! ;) I really liked this. You have already shown me a talent (only read two drabbles so far) for hauntingly beautiful, or simply haunting, phrases, paragraphs, whole drabbles.

[ezzvaldez.livejournal.com]

It may be the Latest Fic Ever, but it was sooo worth the wait, baby. :)

I love it. Thank you.

[shinyredtype.livejournal.com]

1. I love that song SO much.

2. This all works together so beautifully as I read it, that I can't pick just one line or phrase to say lovely things about.

3. You rock! :)

[queenofalostart.livejournal.com]

So many marks, so permanent for so young, and then Harry drops to his knees, whisperhissing words, taking Elijah out and in, strong and sure, and when he comes he thinks it’s magic.

o_O

What a way to start the day. Thankee, darling.

[dacro.livejournal.com]

oh you know how I love your Harry/Elijah! *melts*

He doesn’t know that, but he does know to ask for other things, questions in the palm of his hand and answers in the way Harry dips his head and then toes out his cigarette.

The beauty of a drabble! You say so much in this ONE line! Just blows me away with the promise of tasty images.

And the SCARS! woah!

*hugs*
~J~
(oh! I have to post your other one at hpvamp! I forgot!)

[donnagirl.livejournal.com]

omg... squeeeeee!!!!!!!!

you're so beautiful.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

dude, i don't even really like this pairing. i totally blame you. you're all 'harry/elijah' and i'm all 'challenge!' and now people keep asking for it, liek, wtf?

but, you know, thanks ;)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

thanks! i figure there are only so many stories, but i keep trying to twist them.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

i am addicted to rps & fps crossoves. well, to crossovers in general. thank you!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

*whew* so glad!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

*\o/* thank you!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

thank -you-!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

well, you know. -scars-.

thank you, dear :)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

aw, thank you :)

[dacro.livejournal.com]

*hugs*
most welcome!

mmmmmmscars...

[jenish.livejournal.com]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude, I needed that O.O thank you

Woah. I've never read this pairing before, and, and, SCARS. nngyyhhhhh.

Everything’s undone, Harry has scars everywhere, and when Elijah brushes over them with his fingertips they glow softly

*is blown away* ........ nope, can't say anything else O.O

\o/ ♥

That is all.

[crookedheart.livejournal.com]

Harry mutters something that sounds like Latin and just might be.

what spell did harry cast?

silencing, invisibility... anti-disease???
erm.. fortitude?

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

oh, this is one of those pairing's that's dorrie6's fault. she's all "i like harry! and elijah! ooh! how about them together?" and i'm all "challenge!"

i have some more on my site. thank you!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

contraceptive.





(hee. silencing, but elijah wouldn't know that.)

[crookedheart.livejournal.com]

i figured, and i knew 'lij wouldn't know, but i wanted to ;->