marginalia: xiao zhan looking through movie camera (Default)
yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2003-10-07 01:36 pm

drabble: lost. rebecca/enid of sorts.

for [livejournal.com profile] mcee's default icon challenge. icon being from lost in translation, but as it's just scarlett i'm jumping to ghost world.

and she thinks she'd still know, still feel enid if she came in, now, if she came into this bar rebecca would still feel her pulse across the years, across space.

she only thinks about enid when the setting is right. when she's alone in the crowd, posed and self aware. she knows now that enid had to go, that even she had to go, and it had to be in their own time.

so she's gone now, they're both gone, searching. for each other, themselves.

she wonders if enid found what she was looking for.

or if enid is lost.

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2003-10-07 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
she only thinks about enid when the setting is right. when she's alone in the crowd, posed and self aware.

This is the line that really caught me here... and it was so sad to me, because it made everything clear.

This made me ache.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-10-08 11:15 am (UTC)(link)
someday you should liek see the actual movie :P

thank you :)

[identity profile] untappedbeauty.livejournal.com 2003-10-07 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Oooh, I love it. This is wonderfully well done, and it keeps quite faithful, I thought, to the mood of the movie. Terrific job!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-10-08 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
*beam* thank youo!
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[personal profile] andrealyn 2003-10-08 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm, delicious format. Love the concluding lines the most.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2003-10-09 09:48 am (UTC)(link)
thank you!