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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2004-05-28 10:57 pm

fic: the one who holds the seven stars

[the one who holds the seven stars] - aubrey/maturin
yeah, another day after tomorrow fic. don't look at me like that.

Jack had never seen the like in his many years at sea. The storm tore 'round the Surprise, then through it as though with teeth. Snow fell, disconcerting considering their location, and sleet came down in sheets, icing deck and men alike. Nimble sailors slipped on frozen ropes and Killick began to ration the coffee. As all things must, however, the rain and wind slowed and the storm came to a stop after weeks of torment. The remaining crew, exhausted though they were, worked round the clock implementing basic repairs.

The nights were still cold and Stephen, not finding Jack in his quarters, asked for Jack's boat cloak and sought his friend above deck. He found him pacing bareheaded. "There you are, Stephen," Jack said, oddly spiritless.

Stephen put the cloak 'round Jack's shoulders as if he were a child. "Joy? You are pale. Pullings can take this watch. You should come below and rest."

In Jack's quarters, Stephen poured them each a glass of wine while Jack rifled through papers and muttered to himself. He handed Jack a glass and sat by him at the low table. "Now, for all love, what has you so distraught?"

"It's the damnedest thing, Stephen. " Jack scratched something out, then crumpled the sheet of paper in his hand. "This storm has me completely dished. We had been blown off course, to be sure, and yet I do not understand how this came to be. According to the charts we are," he looked up with thinly veiled despair. "We are in France. More precisely, we are just south of Paris."

Stephen stared at him in shock. "France? Are you certain?" Off of Jack's look he hastily continued. "I do not wish to call your skills into question, dear, but this is beyond sense. Have you consulted the officers?"

"They must know. They are all fine navigators. I am sure half of the midshipmen are below reading their Revelations, waiting to hear the trumpets on the air." A laugh bubbled up out of Jack, harsh and bitter. "Perhaps old Boney is below us as we speak. We always said that God was on our side, that God was for England." As quickly as the laughter had come it was gone again, and Jack covered his face with his rough hand. "Unless there is no more England."

Stephen slipped from his chair and knelt at Jack's feet, one hand on his knee, the other working at the knots in his shoulder. As Jack quieted, Stephen leaned back on his heels, placed his spectacles on the table, and brushed his palm lightly over the top of his head. "I am sure there is nothing in my books about this. Not even in Revelations. " He rose to his feet and pressed a quick kiss to Jack's forehead. "Come, brother, we shall have some music and consider this calmly. We have been taken neither to Heaven nor to the place below, and that at least is something."

(also posted here)

[identity profile] jenish.livejournal.com 2004-05-29 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, that's beautiful Jaci. *hugs Jack* *snuggles Stephen* Bless them!

I'm all awash with Big Gay Love. *sigh* *goes to read more of the books*

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you :)
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2004-05-31 10:08 am (UTC)(link)
This is wonderful! I don't have the words to describe it, and tell you why I love it, but I do.

And you also.
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2004-11-04 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
I re-read this morning after posting my West Wing thing, and GAH, it still hits me in the gut.

"Unless there is no more England."

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-11-05 05:07 pm (UTC)(link)
i want someone to write the sequel.
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[personal profile] starfishchick 2004-11-07 09:52 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmmmmmm...

[identity profile] deaver.livejournal.com 2004-06-01 12:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Very good. And honestly a little creepy, scary to be so off course. Thanks.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
thanks!

i thought i should have kept going, but it was too dark for me to write.

[identity profile] linaelyn.livejournal.com 2004-06-01 02:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely. Very lovely.

Thanks for taking this one on. M&C is a tough one to translate to disaster fic, I'd think.

[identity profile] linaelyn.livejournal.com 2004-06-01 02:15 pm (UTC)(link)
P.S. came here by the link in juniper200's journal.

Must now go thwap her for reccing without feeding you. :-D

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-02 11:18 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you :)

it was kind of interesting to think through. a fandom at sea, they would have even less warning than those on land. it would just begin.

[identity profile] umbo.livejournal.com 2004-06-15 10:42 am (UTC)(link)
Came here from [livejournal.com profile] thefourthvine's rec, and I'm glad I did--that was very nicely done. And sad and a little creepy.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! i was wondering where that sudden influx of feedback was coming from. thank you!

[identity profile] rusty76.livejournal.com 2004-06-15 11:33 am (UTC)(link)
Saw this recc'd on thefourthvine's lj, and even though I haven't seen the disaster movie, this is fantastic.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 06:29 pm (UTC)(link)
i haven't seen it either, but the challenge was too interesting to pass up. thank you!
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[personal profile] astolat 2004-06-16 09:58 am (UTC)(link)
Ahhh, lovely. And really, I don't find it at all fundamentally depressing -- I mean yes, of course, it's depressing, but it doesn't feel hopeless, and they're still together. Much as I sniffle at the loss of Sophie & Diana and England, I would love to see you continue this, and show how they cope with the disasters.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
it certainly is continuing to nibble at my brains, so we shall see. and i agree, i think there's a sort of peace in it.

thank you!

[identity profile] daegaer.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
This is so lovely! I really like your change of the apocalypse to the early 19th century and the growing realisation the characters have that this is not a normal period of horrific weather. Stephen's calm in the face of Jack's despair is very moving.

A really wonderful story!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-06-23 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
honestly, i had read a few fics for this challenge in the angel fandom, and this was the best way i could think of to do one that was relatively original. to balance, i suppose, the other one i wrote for it was in the 26th century :) i also really liked the idea of a perspective at sea, rather than yet another on land.

plus, i just adore writing these two :) thank you! and thank you for the rec over on chicklit!

[identity profile] afrai.livejournal.com 2004-08-02 10:38 am (UTC)(link)
We always said that God was on our side, that God was for England." As quickly as the laughter had come it was gone again, and Jack covered his face with his rough hand. "Unless there is no more England."

*whimper*

You killed me. I am dead. Jaaack!

This was really lovely, and I adore that last line.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2004-08-02 11:09 pm (UTC)(link)
you know, i just reread it when i got this comment and the whole thing still kind of creeps me out. i touched on something i didn't know i had, i think.

thank you so much!

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2005-10-02 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely. You have such a gift with words. Good thing, that.
You paint this beautiful picture that I love to be caught up in.
*adores*

[identity profile] furius.livejournal.com 2006-07-27 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
This is fantastic. It's like all my wishes for a fic coming true- post-apocalyptic pre-industrial, navy ship surviving, friendship intact, you even have the music and wine mentioned-- and the length just on the side of tantalizing. Disaster with hope!

I find this fic utterly romantic in all senses of the word.

*♥ Maturin/Aubrey*

*via crack_van*