drabble: falling. remus/sirius

[marginalia]

remus/sirius (of a sort) double drabble for 15minuteficlets


Remus always liked the first snow, the first real snow, when everything around the castle was softened for a while, sharp edges of the Forest melting away. Inside Hogwarts, it was anything but calm, with students rushing around giddy, trying to focus on the bare minimum required schoolwork before they could escape outside. Strange, he thought, how nature managed to top magic every now and again.

But this year the first snow came too soon after the moon. Still sleepy, he curled by the window, blanket around his shoulders. He read for a while, but his attention drifted, trying to identify people on the grounds below him.

"Looking for someone, Moony?" He turned to see Sirius in the doorway of their room, nose and cheeks still red from the cold, a mug of hot chocolate in each hand. "Stopped by the kitchens on the way up," he said. "Was going to drink them both myself, but you looked so pathetic."

Remus took a mug. "Thanks. Awfully self-sacrificing of you."

"That's me, generous to a fault with my friends," Sirius said, pushing Remus closer to the window and settling in facing him in the window seat. "And sometimes? Even with you."

Comments

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

Ohhhhh... see now I really want you to keep telling the story. This would be such a great beginning to a longer story.

Or, y'know. It could just stay a really great double drabble. Hee.

Strange, he thought, how nature managed to top magic every now and again.

That's my favorite line.

Oh, I just love the relationship you create for them!

"That's me, generous to a fault with my friends," Sirius said, pushing Remus closer to the window and settling in facing him in the window seat. "And sometimes? Even with you."

Completely adorable.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

*peers down string of comments* yup, i think that might happen. it's actually a little further into a longer story and . .um . .i guess i better throw PoA into my suitcase for spokane after all.

i had hoped that the word for this week would make me write some fluffy berlin rotk premiere monaboyd, but instead it's making me write marauders! the hell!?!

thank you, m'dear :)

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

I'm really glad you are writing them. I want to love them like I love H/D. I really really do. You could make it happen. :)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

dude. they should be loved MORE than h/d. because. omgyes.

*hearts her marauders*

i'm all lotr brain for the next week or so and then i am CONVERTING YOU to the beauty that is s/r foreverandeveromg.

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

I will love the S/R but you can never take away my H/D!!!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

*sigh*

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

*snif*

I loves me some Harry.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

*cough*

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaaha

Ah, times, they do change.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

:D

non-seq

[randomchef.livejournal.com]

assuming you get this rss, but just incase-- http://www.livejournal.com/users/officialgaiman/84904.html

Re: non-seq

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

i do :)

*hearts neil* he procrastinates just. like. i do.

and i am in awe of that apple. i had never heard of a cooking apple before! what a sheltered life i lead!

[phineasjones.livejournal.com]

nnnnngg. i try not to write "moooooore!!1!" as feedback. but. omg, more! the tone of this is so beautiful and soft and perfect. and it's so not over yet. i'm in physical need of the next part, here. nnnnng.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

*glee* that makes me so happy because i know at least a little about how you feel about them and so. yes.

and i do want to do more with this. just. i ran out of my fifteen minutes. but it was a good start and i'm not going to let it go. so "moooooore!!1!" is liekomg totally appropriate feedback :)

[offscreen.livejournal.com]

Continue?

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

yeah, i think that can happen ;) for once the fifteen minute thing paid off, getting me started on something longer instead of sputtering out.

i hope.

[starfishchick]

Eeeeee, your Sirius is wonderful!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

yay! thank you :)

[choucroute.livejournal.com]

Jaci.

I will say it again. I love you :D

(and my cousin loved it. ...he has a request... drable from before voldemort...like when he was tom and still at school...)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

oooooh . .tom. wow. i'd have to do some rereading for that. *ponders*

awwwwwww

[dacro.livejournal.com]

I'm with Dorrie..loved this line:
Strange, he thought, how nature managed to top magic every now and again.

I could see it all..*sigh*

oh yes, I would like more of this!
:)

Re: awwwwwww

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

oh you people are so demanding.

there is totally more coming, once i finish slasha baby and steph's fic and beta-ing. so probably in spokane.

:)

Re: awwwwwww

[dacro.livejournal.com]

yay!
*hugs*

[willysunny.livejournal.com]

this is gorgeous. really beautiful another S/R drabble, please - part 2? then part 3? (you get the drift)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

yeah, i kind of see that there's a demand *looks up* :)

and i wanted to keep going, but it's like contrelamontre, there's a time limit.

shall continue later, for sure!

[willysunny.livejournal.com]

i'll wait patiently. :::taps fingers::: *sigh* somehow. :)