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yiling matriarch ([personal profile] marginalia) wrote2005-01-05 09:33 pm

drabble: energetic - colin

[energetic] - colin creevey
part of dorrito's every flavour mood beans.

Colin can't stop looking at everything. It's like a fairy story, but he's too old for that sort of nonsense. When the letter came he gave it to his father, and then stood by, bouncing on the balls of his feet.

Now he's here, a world away from his father's milk truck and the tall and cruel boys at his old school. He wants to learn about ghosts and flying and food that appears out of nowhere, and he doesn't want to sleep for fear he'll miss something, well, magical. He raises his camera to capture it all for Dennis.

[identity profile] offscreen.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh! Obscure character. Nice :)

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you! i was just tickled when i thought of doing him for this :)

[identity profile] dacro.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
wow. You need to be here so I can kiss you. A LOT!
Man, you are amazing. I'm all fangirly over this drabble...still reeling from the Lily one. You've turned me into a MESS!
Colin Love!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
save up the kisses! <3 thank you!

[identity profile] birds-sing.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, that was wonderful!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
thank you!

[identity profile] belovedsnail.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 07:25 pm (UTC)(link)
i've given you this feedback before, but i hope you don't mind hearing it again.

i'm a terrible reader, i realize, and i ignore the minor characters utterly? and you write these things that make me go "OH. oh my god, i never thought about that, and this person really has the potential to be so interesting."

JKR wants us to be annoyed by Colin, i guess, because Harry is annoyed by Colin, so i found him annoying and sort of just kept reading? but this drabble makes him so real and sweet and loveable. it makes him make sense, you know? i'm sort of crinkling my nose with happiness. i'd like to think that the next time i re-read one of the books, i'm going to look at his character differently.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
this is my absolute number one favorite type of feedback to get, so you can give it as often you like ;)

i think it's so exciting to go back and think about things that way, to remember always that we're seeing harry's view of things, so there are all kinds of other facets to these characters that we have yet to discover.
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[identity profile] tabula-x-rasa.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 09:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Another brilliant drabble! I have a soft spot for Colin and THIS is the reason why!

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
yay! thank you :)

[identity profile] jenish.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
CREEVEYS TOO CUTE STOP SEND HELP STOP I HAVE COOKIES AND MILK I WANNA GIVE THEM STOP THE BOUNCING KILLDED ME STOP CANNOT QUUITE SAYING "AWWWWWW" STOP

AWESOME FULLSTOP

[identity profile] jenish.livejournal.com 2005-01-22 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
...wow, cuteness made me unable to spell. "quuite" should say "quit" o.O Need to go Ctrl+Alt+Del on my brain now.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggle* thank you so much!

[identity profile] dorrie6.livejournal.com 2005-01-23 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
Dude. I have always disliked Colin Creevey. But not today.

*heart*

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-01-27 10:02 pm (UTC)(link)
success! thank you :)
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[identity profile] phineasjones.livejournal.com 2005-02-02 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
also love this one. the naive excitement is so perfect for him. and the details - the milk truck, pictures for dennis... so precise and fitting.

[identity profile] marginalia.livejournal.com 2005-02-15 05:20 am (UTC)(link)
as soon as i saw this mood i knew it couldn't be anyone but him. thank you!