drabble: shadow. dom/draco

[marginalia]

[shadow] - dom/draco for ezzvaldez
i can't write draco without it being clichéd, i guess. and really, i'm nearly finished with those requests. *and the crowd goes wild*

Dom sees Draco, thinks with that hair he could be an elf. Someday he'll stop thinking in terms of Rings, but today is not that day. Night. Whatever. All he knows is that he's had plenty to drink and the boy is pretty. That's enough.

Draco's not having the best night, but he's damn good at pretending. He saw Dom ten minutes ago. Dom has an energy about him crossed with a melancholy left-behindness. Draco can definitely identify with that.

They won't exchange names. They won't kiss on the mouth. They'll lance poison from wounds, move on through the shadows.

Comments

[purplkandigrrrl.livejournal.com]

*puurrrrrrrrrrrrrr*

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

you and your draco thing :P

[circe-tigana.livejournal.com]

That was AWESOME :)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

thank you! and thanks for the rec :)

[seedyapartment.livejournal.com]

oh my God, that's so, so, SO cool.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

yay! thank you :)

[dacro.livejournal.com]

wow. Such awesome voice!

Someday he'll stop thinking in terms of Rings, but today is not that day. Night. Whatever.

You have a gift for laying out the whole scene so I can see it. Amazing work, Jaci!
~J~

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

thank you dear!

[willysunny.livejournal.com]

This was so wonderful and so very real. Thank you, Jaci. And you wrote DRACO! HA! *hugs*

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

I STILL DO NOT LIKE DRACO!

but i'm a sucker for a challenge ;)

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

Jaci and Draco, sittin' in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

ew. het.

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

That's the best you've got? HA! I knew it was true!

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

i'm off my game :P

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

I shouldn't tease you. I get the idea that you're having a rough day.

*hugs*

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

i am, but it's ok ;)

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

Well, you deserve hugs anyway. :)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

apropos of nothing, did you read portia's bean/keira today? because if not, that needs to be remedied.

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

I did not. And so you're saying that I should, eh?

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

omg yis. it is short and teh funny and you'll love the ending. yup.

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

omg. am speechless with the funny.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

\o/

i just reread it. i keep missing things. so much funneh!

[donnagirl.livejournal.com]

This Draco... not too cliche'd. It's more about Dom, anyway.

I simply adored "Someday he'll stop thinking in terms of Rings, but today is not that day. Night. Whatever."

It's making me grin,and say it over to myself. :D "But that is not THIS day..." ;)

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

hee! thank you :)

[handelshands.livejournal.com]

wow. that was a hell of a lot of power packed into few words. divine words.

just gorgeous.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

thank you!

[dorrie6.livejournal.com]

How the hell did I not see this before??

Dom has an energy about him crossed with a melancholy left-behindness. Draco can definitely identify with that.

That kinda almost made me cry. Like. Yeah.

Dude.

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

because you were busy. liek. yis.

that was where it started. because i can see them both like that - big things happen, everyone else moves on and is the boy who lived yet again or orlando bloom or whatever, and they're just . .left behind.

dude.

[ezzvaldez.livejournal.com]

Ahh! You posted this while I was without the internet! I'm so glad you posted that master list.

I luuurve this. :) *sigh*

[marginalia.livejournal.com]

yay! thank you :)